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The Original Face Transmitted in fragments from the Hidden Cypress Archive
Preamble There is no story to tell.
Only something that once occurred in a garden.
A master asked a question.
A student did not answer.
Something passed between them.
It is said the master never raked the sand again.
It is said the student became the koan.
And though no one speaks of what was truly exchanged,
the pine needle still lies where it fell.
The Garden A pine needle turned in the wind and fell—askew—across the raked arc of the garden.
Kensho did not move.
He stood at the edge of the veranda, robes unmoved, gaze still.
Across the sand, Archer sat.
Spine unbroken. Palms upward. Eyes half-lowered.
A crow called once. Then silence.
The wind passed through the sleeves of both men.
Kensho’s right thumb shifted under his robe.
He spoke, as he had many times before:
“Show me your original face… before your parents were born.”
The words fell lightly.
No answer followed.
Archer’s breath deepened.
Mist gathered in the cold air—
rising like heat pressed through stone.
Behind his closed eyes: Salt sprayed on sunlit stone.
Scorched cedar smoke escaped from lintels.
Jasmine crushed beneath boots in retreat.
Ash clung to soles.
The scent of iron. A doorframe still warm.
The bridge inside him had held for years.
Memory after memory had set itself—
stone on stone,
tight without mortar.
Each memory pressed its place,
like keystones in a bridge.
His samue no longer lifted with breath.
No mist followed.
No motion.
A single tear gathered at the corner of his left eye—
not fallen, not yet.
Like a man standing too long at the edge of a bridge.
Then, it caught the morning light.
He opened his eyes.
And then, his fist.
In the sand: Kensho saw the imprint—
a hollow where the hand had pressed,
its shape already softening.
The sand that had been gathered gave way.
Loosened from center to edge,
it surrendered form—
grain by grain—
until nothing held.
The wind moved.
It passed across Archer’s open palm,
and took the sand
gently.
Only then did Archer speak:
“Is this what you say,”
“when you stand by Alcántara bridge?”
Kensho did not speak.
His fingers, once still, curled slightly against his sleeve—
without intention,
as if something new had been placed there.
The pine needle still crossed the broken line.
The hand that had opened now rested empty again.
No one moved.
Archer bowed once.
And left.
The Garden After
The pine needle still rested across the raked line.
Kensho stepped into the garden.
The air held its breath.
A basin trickled beyond the wall—steady, distant.
The sound did not call him.
It had always been part of the garden’s silence.
The sand did not resist his weight.
He knelt where the hand had opened.
The grains shimmered faintly,
gathered in a shallow curve.
They had not scattered—only settled.
He placed his palm beside them.
Felt their coolness.
Not absence.
Only the echo of something once held.
He looked at the rake.
Then at the line the pine needle broke.
It bent around the intruder
as if still trying to keep its arc.
He had crossed the bridge many times.
Solid stones.
He had taught others to cross.
But now—
he sensed the grains of sand
slipping between the stones.
His gaze returned to the sand.
He wanted to move it.
To restore order.
To fold the moment into meaning.
But his hand did not rise.
The silence had thickened into shape.
And there,
kneeling beside what had fallen,
the master who had once taught form through emptiness
now listened to the shape of a thing breaking
softly
without asking
to be repaired.
The pine needle stayed.
The lines around it faded.
And in a corner of Kensho’s mind,
as breath gathered,
a single image formed:
a verse half-written
before the reed broke.
and the ink ran.
Scroll of Silent Waters
Entry 147.3 – The Alcántara Gesture
Recorded by Unmon Sosei, third abbot of the Hidden Cypress Hall
It is said that the master Kensho once posed the koan of the original face to a man who was not born into the monastery, but who came to it from fire and salt.
When asked, the man said nothing.
He gathered a handful of sand. Let it fall.
And before it struck the wood, he asked:
“Is this what you say when you stand by Alcántara bridge?”
The master did not reply.
In later years, no student saw him rake the broken pine line again.
Some say this was transmission.
Others say the student became the mirror.
Still others say that nothing happened at all.
But I have seen the place where the grains fell.
And I have seen the pine needle.
And it has not moved.
And once—when no one else was in the garden—
I saw Kensho pass his sleeve over his hand,
then pause,
as if checking whether something was still there.
And one monk, who would not give his name, said only this:
The line broke.
The tear rose.
And no one moved to mend either.
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