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Pastimes : Let's Talk About Our Feelings!!!

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To: Father Terrence who wrote (37839)5/11/1999 2:03:00 AM
From: nihil  Read Replies (1) of 108807
 
I don't seek to understand your complexities. I merely want you to improve your writing for the sake of those you inflict it on. Check out a good book (Strunk and White is good. Or read Orwell's Politics and the English language). Omit unnecessary words, or in your case, unnecessary paragraphs and essays. Use a spell checker.
Practice writing simple sentences (for complex thoughts). Save complex and compound sentences for simple thoughts. Don't write about simple thoughts. Try to identify yellow snakes in the road. Answer questions such as "Are there yellow poisonous snakes in Ghana?" Is John just having a good laugh? I know people begged you for a snake story. Not your fault. You did good!
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