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Pastimes : Calling all SI Poets

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To: jpmac who wrote (835)8/2/1997 1:19:00 AM
From: Tom Kiesel   of 2095
 
Straining to hear the voice so dear.
Trapped in a cocoon of fear and doubt.
Why can't I hear her? What's my crime?
My mind drifts back to how it began.

Selling goods in the village market,
I made a life, simple, honest and humble.
I never considered what could happen.
Everyone kept a gun at their stand, you see.

Just a punk kid, maybe fifteen.
He pulls a gun, screams for my cash.
I recall in still motion,
my hand reaches the gun.

Two shots ring out, the people duck.
He and I fall in perfect time.
Our eyes meet, and the life passes out of his.
I hit the ground. Scream.

(I'm not sure where this started, where it went, or where it's going. It's a mystery to me. I doubt it's any good. I don't know what any of you think a good poem is, but it's my own, and at most, I'm neutral on this one. I post this because I can, and because maybe someone'll like it, hate it, or hopefully both. If you want to, go
ahead and continue it.)
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