Your text in bold, mine in italics:
1. This Thread This thread
2. all you all of you
3, 4. That's right, step That's right! Step
5. right up folks and right up, folks, and
6. hearts heart's
7. content, content;
8, 9, 10, 11, 12. minutes its ok minute. It's okay.
13. Then when Then, when
14. All post must All posts must
15. and you CAN and CAN
16. All post are All posts are
17. just it, there is just it. There is
18. thread you deserve thread, you deserve
19. Of course, 20 words are less 20 words or less
20. . Viva la SI!
Do I win? If so, what do I win? Can you tell I've spent way too many hours of my life grading Business Communications papers?
Bob
Addendum: I suppose #5 should've counted as two, since there are two commas missing. |
