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To: H James Morris who wrote (127719)7/4/2001 3:47:22 PM
From: craig crawford  Read Replies (2) of 164684
 
>> Mark, lets go through this post of yours. <<

hj, let's do the same for you. you forgot the apostrophe in 'lets'.

>> #1, you should have a 'a' before the damn <<

that should be 'an a', with an n.

>> #4, you don't need to start hole with a 'w', hole would have even got by the Motley fool censors. <<

'fool' should be capitalized and it should read: 'would have gotten'. the correct way is: 'you got past the mf censors' or 'you would have gotten'. you need to be careful of those past participles!

>> # 5, on an Internet public chat-line whatever you say becomes another persons business <<

no space needed between # and 5. there should be an apostrophe between the n and s in 'persons' showing ownership or possession.

>> So, other than that, is Commerce one (CMRC) still one of your core holdings? <<

you don't really need a comma after so. once again the 'one' in commerce one should be capitalized. you don't capitalize your first name and use lower case for your last name do you? well the same goes for the title of a company in this case.
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