too allusive?
maybe...
i normally don't like to be approached by more than twenty of these words in the same month:
overarching heidegger solicitude handedness schematize dianoetic penumbral apperception aesthesis trockenberen auslese morphology fatted dessication quiddity essentia lair jeremiad minotaur blather effluvia reconnoitering espy portent mozaritan wraith savour artifice haughtily
this is two months worth of reader's digest's "it pays to increase your wordpower"
but then, i'm a...
-werd wimp (no offense intended)
maybe if you'd made it rhyme it would have been less allusive
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves did gyre and gimble in the wabe. All mimsy were the borogoves, And the mome raths outgrabe. "Beware the Jabberwock, my son! The jaws that bite, the claws that catch! Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun the frumious Bandersnatch!"
He took his vorpal sword in hand: Long time the maxome foe he sought- So rested he by the Tumtum tree, And stood a while in thought.
As in uffish thought he stood, The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame, Came whiffling through the tulgey wood, And burbled as it came.
One, two! One, two! And through and through The vorpal blade went snicker-snack. He left it dead, and with its head He went galumphing back.
"Has thou slain the Jabberwock? Come to my arms, my beamish boy! O frabjous day! Calloh! Callay! He chortled in his joy.
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves Did gyre and gimble in the wabe: All mimsy were the borogoves, And the mome raths outgrabe.
-lewis caroll (jabberwockey) |