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Politics : Idea Of The Day

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To: BubbaFred who wrote (41806)11/25/2001 2:39:34 PM
From: Da Cat in Da Hat  Read Replies (1) of 50167
 
Not personal, but if you want to get the attention of Americans that you consider to be illiterate then you should be careful how you compose your message.

For example, <watch out for isolated red neck countries.> probably should be areas, not countries.

<not possible to exclude all the unwordly and illiterate Americans.> Unworldly, not unwordly.

<not meaningful or unthoughtful or basically unconcious?> unconscious

Several places needed a conjunctive verb; "the" should have been used often instead of the stream of consciousness jump; run-on sentences could have been broken up, and so on.

It's marginally presumptive to call people illiterate because they do not speak more than one language if you have a problem composing your thoughts in acceptably correct American English.
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