what a wondrous concept....and so gracefully expressed...
But , like all artists looking back over at what I wrote
can see ways I could have said it better ....that there was/is
just one more nuance of phrase , texture of thought and imagery I could also have used to evoke even finer resolution in that deep "felt" vision I wanted to share...
And know the reader truely catches the thought as clearly , and goes
ahhhhhh.... I see exactly what you see.
but so often it seems , you are seeing /living already with these same views of the metaphor .
* We have all gazed upon the face of the Sun and heard the birds greeting the dawn in another irresistible movement of first life beginning, like it has so miraculously a million times before , for eons.... the warm rays of the morning sun setting off creation once again...and stood beneath the enchanted moonlight , our minds enveloped by the scent of Jasmine or Orange blossom and Honeysuckle touched tenderly by rich breathing tapestry that vibrates throughout our senses ...the gentle faint rustling of leaves , and love-calls of the nightengale and music of the night in our blood ....and all this heard by others just like us , a 1000 yrs before , and they like we stood rapt in awe , part of this rich dream called existence.
you have a beautiful mind...
And you are a beautfiful dreamer, too , who's been often near to true love & caring herself and near to the soul & heart of life ....
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