"The author of the Christian Science Monitor article on Fallujah seems OK"
Not in my book. The first three paragraphs paint a horrific picture of events that most likely never happened. She told a story almost exclusively from a one sided POV. She gave lip service to what US military had to say.
I expect journalists to know enough background to be able to tell the reader anything critical to the story she is telling. I also expect to hear a fair amount of coverage given to all parties relevant to the story.
The terrorists & thugs of Fallujah aren't appropriately cited as the perpetrators of the violence. Instead, we're left with the impression that, once again, US troops are committing atrocities & terrorizing innocent civilians.
And the reported never stopped to ponder why anyone in their right mind would stay in Fallujah after Bremer & CO all said we were going to go in, arrest or kill Sadr & put down the illegal militia, "for the murder and mutilation of four US security contractors in late March".
Nope, nothing that critical of that made it into the article.
With most highways into the city either blocked by US military, or deemed too dangerous to travel
This slaughter seems to have come out of the blue, trapping all these innocent civilians.
refugees offer one of the few first-hand accounts of the turmoil.
Yup, they were the main source for this story.
"The doctors are afraid of the Americans - that they will shoot them even in the hospitals."
"I saw nine people on the roof, and the helicopter shot them all dead," he says. "On the way to Baghdad I saw bodies in the car. I couldn't help them because the Americans were shooting everyone."
Yup, plenty of deference to those folks & they are treated as though they are perfectly credible people.
There wasn't much room for any balance for the US military though. Only two vague sentences in the whole piece. No one is quoted.
Coalition forces have disputed claims that attacks have killed or wounded many civilians, though they say the number is impossible to verify. They have reported that most of the victims were probably participating in the insurgency.
To me, it's just as much as what's not said & what was said that bothers me with this type of journalism. This was a, 'throw mud on the US military' hit piece whether intended or not IMO. |