LOL -- that was in a chap book of unfinished or let's say shards of lines from a few years ago that I kept and I messed with it, remembering the metaphors, the knife is her tongue, the dog was puppy love or a relationship or something, snakes were jumbled twisted thoughts that were a mess, some painless-harmless some poisonous............
here's another set of lines to play with....
in midst of mist, floating water, drowning my vision, so serene as if were a dream lucid thoughts liquid.....
and I can't remember what sparked that.
and finally a Scott Poole classic (he's from Spokane- got one of his books)
The Purpose of Memories When I was six I stared up at a tree in my parent's backyard and thought . . . I want to remember that fir tree forever just to see if I can do it. I'm thinking of that insignificant tree right now. I still see row upon row of its green spiked wings growing smaller to a point against an oncoming storm. Sometimes in dreams that tree falls on me and it's not terrible, it's comforting like the warm pressure of my young daughter, bouncing on my stomach after I lie down on the floor to straighten my sore back, so I can rise again tall in her memories, so she'll remember me years from now, while watching her son carve memories from the sky. |