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Politics : Bush-The Mastermind behind 9/11?

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To: Don Earl who wrote (8355)9/25/2004 2:04:16 PM
From: Raymond Duray  Read Replies (1) of 20039
 
Hi Don,

I've just reviewed your thread header. I like the way that you've broken things down into a series of numbered declarative sentences and have made the story flow from one logical point to another. That was very well done.

If I were have written such a piece, (and I do intend to steal this item from you, BTW), I'd provided a lot more endnotes and links to back up the assertions being made. My idea is that you've created a great document for a lay reader, and I'd like to build upon that foundation and start to create the document that a criminal prosecutor would feel comfortable with in terms of the rules of evidence.

That said, I'd encourage you to reverse the order of the information being presented in the header. To immediately impugn the Zionists may be something that all of us here agree with (after enough study of the subject matter), but it is a bit jarring to have that long list of Zionists in the Bush White House/DoD apparatus at the start of the page. I'd prefer to see that list at the end of the thread header, rather than at the top of the page. It's simply a matter of bringing in more readers and not offending some with off-putting materials that could be easily miscast as being racist. Better to alert the reader that there was a conspiracy at the top of the page, and then point the finger at the culprits at the bottom of the page.

JMO, Ray :)
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