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Pastimes : A Poetry Corner

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To: Mac Con Ulaidh who wrote (1296)9/16/2005 4:23:09 PM
From: elpolvo  Read Replies (2) of 1582
 
There was something light and fragile about it.

alrighty then. since it only makes sense to you,
change the last two lines to...

something light and fragile
floated out from under her blue dress

LOL

<laughs at his own audacity in trying to
coax a poet to write BAAAD>

sorry. :-)

thanks for the great writing.

-el backseat writer
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