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Pastimes : Short Stories - 50 words or less
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To: Stan who wrote (2409)5/21/2008 11:02:10 AM
From: ManyMoose   of 2633
 
Even the best writers need editors. From my own limited writing experience, I know that you get so close to what you've written that you can't see its faults.

Your story had no faults. I was just being a smart ass.

The word "and" does lend a bit of breathlessness to the line, which is certainly appropriate for the story.
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