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Pastimes : Short Stories - 50 words or less

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To: ManyMoose who wrote (2437)	9/16/2008 6:41:24 PM
From: one_less	1 Recommendation Read Replies (1) of 2633

It was a mistake but as usual I assumed my own infallibility and foolishly did not think about the possible need to edit until beyond the fifteen minute window. I see what you are saying though and I like it both ways. The edited version on my desk top, with a few updates, looks like this... Birth of Conscience ====================== Grasp another’s finger … objects flow, ideas are held, until the world is understood. Pets and ponds reveal delicacies of instinctual nature … unlike him who has few, among them this one ... to cause goodness around him or allow the influence of corruption to bring ruin upon all that he sees. I've edited 'The Warrior's Steed' and 'Answering The Rain' also. I really like this 50 word idea.

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