Hi Ken,
As long as you're soliciting suggestions I'll throw in mine.
Agree it should be short and sweet, I have skipped over many lengthy thread headers. The background and research info should be located at a hot-linked thread of some sort if that is possible, otherwise omitted. Anything in the intro should be non-perishable info so to speak (ie the reference to #2 diesel). Definitely take out NASDAQ but leave the symbol there. Also, I think the fact that GRNO is a reporting company is the one very important issue for folks doing DD, so reference to that should be made, although not sure about links, as everyone has their own sources for checking that info and they too might be perishable URLs, other than the official SEC site. You can see I took some snips from press releases, etc.
Lastly, I guess a reference to the SEC ongoing investigation should be made. Maybe it could be pointed out that reference to it is in the 10QSB. Not knowing how long before an official settlement is kind of a strange subject to deal with.
Here is my version minus the reference to the SEC investigation. _______________
Green Oasis Environmental, Inc. (GRNO)
Green Oasis Environmental, Inc's waste oil refining process, called the EnviroEconomics System (TM), is designed to convert waste oils into marketable fuels in a closed, one-step process of thermal cracking and distillation. The Company manufactures equipment for its own use as well as for marketing to others.
GRNO is a reporting company. Historical reports can be found at sec.gov.
GRNO Website: greenoasis.com
CONTACT: William D. Carraway, President of Green Oasis Environmental at 803-722-5771, or e-mail at grno@awod.com. _______________
Feel free to add to, delete from, or simply ignore any of this!!
Thanks,
LLLPaR Mark |