Good grief, "Doctor" Biden can't even spell. She certainly can't proofread. From the very first substantive (I'm being generous here) page, Introduction:
Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body in terms of age, gender, race, and socio-economic status. The needs of the student population are often undeserved, resulting in a student drop-out rate of almost one third.
Really, the students' needs are undeserved?
Hey, Jillie, there is a feature called spellcheck in all word processing software.
A typo at the beginning is deadly. Or should be.
How about the prose? Stilted, stuffy pseudo-academic garbage.
Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body in terms of age, gender, race, and socio-economic status.
Should read simply: Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body.
I had to stop, couldn't take it.
But I'm a snob when it comes to writing serious stuff. |
