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Pastimes : Calling all SI Poets

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To: Proud_Infidel who wrote (1406)3/19/1998 11:26:00 AM
From: Carol  Read Replies (2) of 2095
 
Hi Brian:

Thanks for the posting the link to your thread. There are many wonderful, talented writers on SI. I hope some of them will take advantage of the opportunity to share their stories.

I read your story and I liked it. I'm not an expert on critiquing others writing, but I know what I do like. That was a really terrifying chain of events which lead to the demise of your character.

A couple of threads already have continuing stories as the participants on those threads amuse themselves with manipulating various characters. It's something like those books you buy now, where at a certain point in the book, you have to choose which direction the character will take.

Nice to see you here, Brian, do you write poetry as well?

Carol
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