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Microcap & Penny Stocks : Mako Capital Co. (MAKO)

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To: Leslie Tack who wrote (298)4/13/1999 11:03:00 AM
From: HarveyO  Read Replies (1) of 501
 
I think the new Website has potential. I would like to see the Mission and or Vision of the organization more focused and clearly stated. There needs to be a little more charisma in some areas. The choice of key words could also be improved. For example on the opening page we have...."Creating Momentum That Gathers and Pushes Financial Communications to Investors".
Personally, I don't think the word "Pushes" gives enough strenght to the intended message. In some ways, that word has a negative connotation. Also, the word "Gathers" is too pastoral in my impression.
We need a phrase that is more intentional, deliberate, charismatic, and aggressive. I could go on, but for now let me just add that I think the company is headed in the right direction.
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