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Microcap & Penny Stocks : ABFG - AMERICAN BENEFITS GROUP, INC.

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To: Spamboy who wrote (1139)4/16/1999 2:02:00 AM
From: Jeffrey S. Mitchell  Read Replies (3) of 4128
 
Kowboy, hope you don't mind a small critique of your four bullet points... and I mean this in the kindest sort of way of course.

1) ABFG is currently being looked at by some very large investment groups.

You're on the right track here, you just need to embellish it a bit more. How about "I hear a major fund in Texas will be taking a major position by Tuesday at the latest. Get in now!" You see, "fund" sounds better than "investment group" and Texas implies they are probably rich oil men. By also setting a time frame you are implying urgency. This will allow you to sell sooner.

2) This will become apparent very soon.

This really should be part of 1) above.

3) Some outstanding announcements (with meat) are imminent.

You've got the excitement, but, again, you lack urgency. How about "Big news coming. Wednesday the latest. Get ready to rock!"

4) Sklar will be announcing that he plans to run for President shortly after his return from DC!

Nah... you need something that will directly benefit ABFG. How about something like "Sklar to give speech at White House this Wednesday at 8pm. Gore to endorse ABFG." Wait, on second thought, strike that one; it's been tried. (g)

- Jeff
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