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To: Jacques Chitte who wrote (42326)11/20/1999 12:56:00 PM
From: Ilaine  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 71178
 
Excellent, excellent. Definitely publishable, IMO. First rate. I wish I knew someone to send it to. Think I'll call in whatever chip I have with Nancy Collins (Sunglasses After Dark), who used to babysit Ben back in New Orleans, and ask her for suggestions on how to flog it.

One small, tiny, teeny quibble: I wish you hadn't nick-named the bad guys "pussies." I know you hate cats . . . . but the image of ugly smelly mollusks called pussies, um, well, say no more.<g>

Sending Ms. Collins an email now.



To: Jacques Chitte who wrote (42326)11/20/1999 1:27:00 PM
From: Rambi  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 71178
 
Great ending!!!! I agree with Cobe--- surely there must be some science fiction mags that you could submit this to??



To: Jacques Chitte who wrote (42326)11/20/1999 4:27:00 PM
From: Crocodile  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 71178
 
Excellent story... great ending... I agree with Coby... you should try to get it published somewhere... or maybe you could pull off a Ray Bradbury and call it "The Darian Chronicles"...;-}