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Pastimes : The Short Story Laboratory -- Ignore unavailable to you. Want to Upgrade?

To: elpolvo who wrote (40)	8/16/2001 3:07:52 PM
From: abuelita	Read Replies (1) \| Respond to of 83

Carlos, please tell your friend I enjoyed his story. I don't know how he did it but the foreshadowing was great. Very early in the story, you just knew something was going to happen and it got my heart rate up when it did! (g) Thanks rosita :)

To: elpolvo who wrote (40)	8/16/2001 4:58:26 PM
From: Clappy	Read Replies (1) \| Respond to of 83

I like his writing style. I could feel myself getting more and more tense as my eyes accelerated with each word during his run-on sentence. I ask Maddy for the leash, she hands it to me, I lasso one end out to Pebbles, it lands right next to her but she just looks at it, as if wondering why I would want to take her for a walk now, and, besides, how do I expect her to put it on herself since she doesn't have any fingers...and even if she did she is now using them to try and escape early death by GNAW. I felt myself reaching down to try to push the dog up the slippery slope but nervous laughter kept stopping me. I just can't understand why Pebbles wouldn't grab the leash in her teeth so I could pull her out without this risking my life. Lassie did stuff like that in the movies, Rin Tin Tin too. LOL! A lot like my dog. If I had a blue frog I'd give it to him also... I'm all out. I wonder if he'd settle for a Pabst Blue Ribbon Award instead. members.spree.com -Ol'Yeller