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To: Sultan who wrote (1065)11/15/2002 11:46:16 AM
From: HG  Respond to of 1595
 
Yes...so it does in pure urdu too...but it takes away the commonness of experience imo. Some classical ones 'need' to be expressed in pure language...

I wrote one in pure hindi long ago...trying to remember it...it had won a few local awards back then...i dunno if you'll be able to understand it completely.
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Ek tumhara sparsh, mehka gaya tan
Yaad aaya kuchh bhoola sa, kuchh paa gaya man

Rah bhatki thi main pathik, jaal sudha ki pyyas thi
Anjuli bhar ke sneh ki saugat di, pighlaa gaya man

Sannidhya ho tumhara to yeh shila bhi sej hai
ongari pirona baalon mein, uljha gaya man

Sammohneey, sanshobhneey kamal nayanon se
Parinay ka parichit aawaahan, sihraa gaya man

Saraswati ke the phool piroye, singhar kiya tha shraddha ka,
Aankhon mein ek khwaab samakar, bhatkaa gaya man.
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Another hindi one -

Dudhiya raushnee se ghar ko sanwara tumne
Aaj phir lekar mera naam pukara tumne

Jal pade pyaar ke deep yahaan har rang ke
Chhand ko aaine mein jyon aaj utaara tumne

Khilkhilaane lage aangan mein kayee indradhanush
Is tarah roop ko heere sa nikaara tumne

Tank gaye raat ke roomal mein laakhon taare
Kanakhiyon se jo aasma ko nihaara tumne

Zindagi ban ke diwaali si jagmagaa uthee
Bhar liya aank mein jab aaj dobaara tumne.