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To: HG who wrote (695)1/19/2003 2:13:48 PM
From: Poet  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 1582
 
I just discovered this gorgeous poem about cold weather by the Irish poet Eamon Grennan:

Cold Morning
Eamon Grennan

Through an accidental crack in the curtain
I can see the eight o'clock light change from
charcoal to a faint gassy blue, inventing things

in the morning that has a thick skin of ice on it
as the water tank has, so nothing flows, all is bone,
telling its tale of how hard the night had to be

for any heart caught out in it, just flesh and blood
no match for the mindless chill that's settled in,
a great stone bird, its wings stretched stiff

from the tip of Letter Hill to the cobbled bay, its gaze
glacial, its hook-and-scrabble claws fast clamped
on every window, its petrifying breath a cage

in which all the warmth we were is shivering.



To: HG who wrote (695)1/19/2003 3:46:39 PM
From: ManyMoose  Respond to of 1582
 
That's better.



To: HG who wrote (695)1/19/2003 6:34:00 PM
From: elpolvo  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 1582
 
hap-

i unjoy the poetry of her songs more than them strung together in music....

issat a pun or a typo?

my appreciation of poetry is limited.

i prefer music but my appreciation of music
is also limited.

mixing music with lyrics is a mixed-media art.
it requires a multi-talented artist or multiple
artists collaborating on a work.

given the whole body of that art that's ever been
produced, i like far less than one percent of it.

i unjoy a hell of a lot more than i enjoy of
poerty, music, AND music with lyrics... but
it is an exquisite treat to hear a song with
fabulous lyrics and fabulous, complimentary
music. there's a synergy that makes it more
than the sum of its parts. when that song is
performed by talented, expressive performers...
it's magic!

i'm trying to think of an example...

"Vincent" by Don Mclean comes very close, except
i don't agree with the conclusion...

"this world was never meant for one as beautiful
as you"

it's a baldface lie! that's exactly what this world was
made for... treasure hunting. <g> but maybe don is being
sarcastic?? if so, then he should sing the last line
baldfacedly, no?

lemme try to find another example...
where the music and the lyrics both stand
alone as beautiful works... but combined are
ever more powerful than the sum.
(this is not easy to do while watching football) <g>

"After All" by Dar Williams on "The Green World"

"I Want You" performed by Cliff Eberhardt on "Nod to Bob"

"Have I Told You Lately" by Van Morrison

"I Can't Make You Love Me" by Bonnie Raitt

"Sunlight" by Jessie Colin Young

"One Particular Harbor" by Jimmy Buffett

"This Old Porch" by Lyle Lovett

"My Buddy" performed by Jerry Jeff Walker

"Dead Skunk In The Middle Of The Road" by Loudon Wainwright III

"Step Right Up"
"I Want You" and
"Looking For The Heart Of Saturday Night" by Tom Waits

hey... cool. i just made myself a new CD.

just like life, this art stuff is great but
the best part is the journey and the hunt.

(meanwhile, the team i was rooting for has won)

goody.

-elpolvo