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To: Honor First who wrote (2201)10/17/2006 9:19:44 AM
From: ManyMoose  Respond to of 2633
 
Blush! I still struggle. Thank you for the encouragement. It really helps.


And recall, please....
You are NOT a wannabe :)



To: Honor First who wrote (2201)10/18/2006 11:32:56 PM
From: Stan  Read Replies (2) | Respond to of 2633
 
Brevity of words and depth of meaning is the essence of the poetic. Selection of words and their order are the priorities.
The last word (or expression) of a sentence has the most impact, the next most impactive is the first.

If I say, "I found the gun at the bottom of the drawer," it has some drama. But if I say, "In the bottom of the drawer, I found the gun," it has a lot more drama.