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To: CWolf who wrote (23851)12/4/2011 4:58:09 PM
From: ManyMoose  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 26417
 
Really? That's a great compliment. Maybe I will do it if you guys will give me frank feedback.

I think you should post your story here... one chapter at a time.



To: CWolf who wrote (23851)12/4/2011 9:55:22 PM
From: ManyMoose1 Recommendation  Respond to of 26417
 
On reconsideration of the wise counsel of my muse, Miss Honor First, I have decided not to post the story chapter by chapter here.

However, I post the following link to a synopsis and excerpt from the NaNoWriMo website which is already out there in cyberspace. It will probably not be here forever, so if you're interested, follow it now:

nanowrimo.org

The story begins after these words which appear at the bottom of the excerpt: "I remember when my father made it, when I was young:"

Please, if you read that far, let me know what you think. Would you read further? If not, why not? If so, what do you like about it? Do you see any booboos or typos?