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To: Moonray who wrote (166792)3/3/2014 6:58:45 PM
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Two errors:

The word "once" needs to be capitalized. At least the "o".

"Your sincerely" should be "Yours sincerely" - and do companies sign like that?

"This process does not take more than 3 minutes" while correct, is usually expressed as "This process takes less than 3 minutes"

As if I can write English real good.

But Apple does have the $ to hire people who majored in English in college and can output perfect sentences with barely a thought.

Not me, I struggle.

As Latka would say "Thank you very much for reading this!"



To: Moonray who wrote (166792)3/3/2014 11:24:02 PM
From: aaplAnnie  Read Replies (1) | Respond to of 213172
 
Moon, well at least they use "proper" english. No one would ever guess that it was a fake.