Ten's English and reasoning are not much better. That is why he thinks Jill is so smart.
Message 33092872
Reading Jill Biden's Ed.D. "executive position paper" (ersatz dissertation), which she wrote at the age of 55, and it's bad.
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Lowlights:
"Three quarters of the class will be Caucasian; one quarter of the class will be African American...the remaining seats will be filled with students of Asian descent or non-resident aliens."
What remaining seats?"The unique nature of the classroom allows for a complexity of problems as well."
This person expects, on the basis of this effort, to be called "doctor."
"'By 1963, public and private two year headcount enrollment stood at 850,361. By 1980, enrollment had grown to 4,526,287... approximately a 230 percent increase in student attendance'" Uh, VERY approximately.
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Message 33093013
Good grief, "Doctor" Biden can't even spell. She certainly can't proofread. From the very first substantive (I'm being generous here) page, Introduction:
Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body in terms of age, gender, race, and socio-economic status. The needs of the student population are often undeserved, resulting in a student drop-out rate of almost one third.
Really, the students' needs are undeserved?
Hey, Jillie, there is a feature called spellcheck in all word processing software.
A typo at the beginning is deadly. Or should be.
How about the prose? Stilted, stuffy pseudo-academic garbage.
Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body in terms of age, gender, race, and socio-economic status.
Should read simply: Delaware Technical and Community College serves a highly diverse student body.
I had to stop, couldn't take it.
But I'm a snob when it comes to writing serious stuff. |
