Here is one.
scene
Roof top, New York City, dark, foggy, night.
Below, in an ally, a family leaves a bank with their trading acccount summary.
From behind, two brokers jump out, and club the father, the wife screams, the child just stares in disbelief. The brokers steal of the money for their commissions, and delayed responses.
scene 2
Roof top, the brokers sit, splitting the money
"you shouldn't have pushed that kid"
"shut up. Just shut up. Do you want your half? Then shut up."
"you hear about schwabb and barney, falling off a roof last week. They say it was that new broker guy"
"Shut up, I said"
pan to the corner, a dark figure drops to the roof top.
Both men jump to their feet.
"shoot him!" BANG, BANG.
they turn to run to the stairs, but the dark figure stands up.
He kicks the first broker into a roof top shed. CRASH
he then shoots a cable and drags the other broker towards him, screaming , and kicking.
He then grabs the broker by his scruff and dangles him over the side of the building .
"Don't kill me. DON'T KILL ME!"
"I'm not going to kill you.......I want you to do me a favor... . . . . . ...I want you to tell all of your friends about me....."
"but...what are you?"
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.I'M PANAMERICANMAN
AND THAT'S A COMMERICIAL I WANT TO SEE! |